Sometimes I don't know why I keep reading this series, this MC and writing is so dumb, probably the only reason why I'm reading this is so I don't feel like I missed out on something before it expires. Well I completed Volume 3 now, on to the next one.

Alright going to follow them RN, thanks for the heads up btw.

I'm rereading the pre-pub in the catch-up week promotion, so not sure if it's already corrected in the epub:

vol 2 part 7 72%:

"I'm sorry." She pressed her face to neck.

Should likely be "face to his neck," though it's not necessarily wrong as is if the line was intended to have that particular nuance.

Lol same thoughts a couple weeks ago, and man do I procrastinate too much, as I'm typing this I keep putting aside this 11 page paper plus a 3 page essay due in 2 days that will count as my final for this semester.

That's cool, I'll ignore them unless they are new then.

Thanks!

@James-Rushton I was just thinking about your post and thought that your doing fixes to volume as well as two may bode well for this being liscened to a publisher, otherwise why dig into fixes on editions already epublished? Maybe it's wishful thinking on my part, but if it does happen I'll buy the hell out of physical editions of these!

Okay guys, thanks very much for your questions! We'll pick some out and send them over to the author.

Short answer is Yes...

For the longer answer please take a look at this forum topic

Also buying the books on the site has been quite worth it due to the premium content available within the books, take a look at the list of premium content per book

And he keeps buying the armor every time he perishes... Because the starting armor looks bad. Buying armor just to lose it every 2 minutes. I thought his excessive spending was bad in previous volumes, but that made me cringe.

I could totally see myself being in Iris' shoes. I always like creativity in games like LittleBigPlanet, Spore, and Scribblenauts Unlimited.

Errors:
Part 1: "robbed the people their will to live" - of their will
Part 2: triangles that separate sub-parts aren't formatted the same way as in other parts
Part 5: "I watching your hilarious transformation sequence" - was watching
Part 8: "Ha! I found you!" - Rekka talks about a wound so I assume there was no object pronoun in original and it should actually be "found it".
Part 6: "It had been tens of millions of years on the outside. Since time passed even slower in this fake world, it must have felt like an eternity here alone." - also something that needs to be checked against original because it's stated multiple times that shorter intervals of time pass here while longer intervals pass on outside, i.e. time flies by faster inside the seal, so saying "time passed even slower" doesn't seem appropriate.

Typos:
"took out a knife and starting cutting away at the belts on my gauntlets" - started cutting away
"Sit Touya" - Sir Toya
"we did find two shelves of books still in tact" - intact. This one occurs in other parts too, so Ctrl+F is your friend.

@Terrence I finished this one the other day. It was so enjoyable... Loved the ending :ok_hand: ... and the ecchi. :persevere:

54% "I watching your hilarious transformation sequence" to "I was watching your"

48% "A moment later, a flame the size of a first appeared" to "the size of a fist"

@Rahul-Balaggan Ah, it seems I had a typo in the filename so it wasn't working!

Fixed now!

91% "that there building is" to "That building there is" ... I think -,-"

There was another song Juna sang too during the America's Got Talent competition to serve the king. Find that one? xD

Occultic Nine: After you read the forumer say "Snaaaaaaake" watch this.

https://youtu.be/aqXRGQJLsCk

In part 3, 35% "he feel like he" --> he felt.

Such depth in this story! Such pathos! Such power!

The book definitely does drag in some parts and at times becomes pretty lame siscon material but the joyful humor and affably self aware silliness just clicks for me and I really enjoy this series. Roll on volume three!!

FYI Sam, I like 10 parts per book for this series, bite sized chunks work a charm here.