Corrections P2-V4-P3

[Gus The Snail]

Just some things I picked up on, that may have already been listed.

At 82% Sister Myne should be Lady Myne (the smith knows Myne through the Gilberta Company not the Temple)

At 92% Myne says "Roger" but the people of this world would not understand that as meaning ok, or understood. Which would work better. Also Myne is a book freak not a military buff... (as far as i know)

[Rahul Balaggan]

@Gus-The-Snail

Thank you for taking the time to point these out.

For Boowkorm volumes we actually have a dedicated thread for corrections for each volume.

https://forums.j-novel.club/topic/3119/corrections-bookworm-part-2-vol-4?page=1

Could you please repost your corrections in that topic and as I will closing this one down.

Thank you