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[Editing/Grammer] How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom
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Not sure if this already exists in a members only section or if it's not needed as this is "pre-pub" and therefore expected. If not I suppose this will be the start of an editing thread for How a Realist Hero Rebuilt the Kingdom (現実主義勇者の王国再建記).
Part 1
10% - The Northern Countries had been laid waste, and the demonic forces, which had until then held only the equivalent of a small county, came to rule a third of the continent.66% - Though it felt like at threat, it was not an actual threat, so, to keep up appearances, the Empire would not insist on it any further.
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@redmaw I've rewritten those two sentences and improved their readability IMO.
Please feel free to point out any other sections you think could use some polish!
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Volume 3 Part 11,
Theres a line with a 0 in it."slobber0covered"
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@ruifung In the future just post in the thread in the members section for this particular voilume and it'll be more noticed I think.
