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Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash Typo
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I'm not sure where to put this, so I'm putting it here. Towards the end of Chapter 5 of Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash there's a typo.
It says "Summon a demon!" Ranta clenched his had into a fist...
Unless I'm reading it wrong, shouldn't "had" be "hand"?
Also, I tried to upload a picture (I'm on my phone) to show you guys the mistake but it said I didn't have permission.
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Thanks for the report. Fixed!
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Chapter 11
About 75% on mobile. "They were coming over is way now"
"is" should be "his"
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Thanks again. Fixed.
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Chapter 16
About 34% on mobile. "Haruhiro her envied for that".
I believe it should be "Haruhiro envied her for that"
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Fixed. :)
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Chapter 16
For these ones I'm not to sure, but the sentencing seemed weird, so I thought I'd mention it.
About 50% "Ranta forcibly kicked the a goblin away from himself"
"the a goblin"?
About 82% "He wore a long asymmetrical skirt his lower body..."
"skirt his lower"?
Sorry in advance if that's how it's supposed to be, they just seemed weird to me.
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Again like my previous post, I'm not to sure about this one, it just seemed weird to me. Sorry in advance if it's supposed to be like that.
Chapter 20
The 4th paragraph before the chapter ends.
"First her machete knock away its spear..."
Should "knock" be "knocked"?
