V12P5 55% - maybe on other could - one
although might actually be no? Weird typo

@pcj Thank you!

Volume 9 - Part 4:

[2%] clean of his vassals' dirty work. There was ► It should be vassals’ (different ’ ). [6%] something ‘impossible’ wasn't ideal as far ► It should be wasn’t (different ’ ). [26%] best. In fact, Arcanawas almost two times ► Missing space. [38%] with one another to put on a grand show ► Missing period. [45%] countries that weren't even on good terms ► It should be weren’t (different ’ ). [46%] Arcana had created it As a great power ► Missing period. [46%] Arcana had no chance but to invite several ► Given the context it should be choice? [59%] playing along. No one's going to come to ► It should be one’s (different ’ ). [67%] Part 7 — Pupil ► It should be Part 8. [72%] doing it based on countries' standings; ► It should be countries’ (different ’ ). [75%] work towards the other's destruction. ► It should be other’s (different ’ ). [77%] in this room from a medium-sized nation. ► It should be was from. [83%] for admiration. The Arcanan paintings they ► It should be Arcanian. [85%] lose against Arcana. By “wouldn’t lose,” ► The dialogue's closing double quote is missing. [99%] though everyone pretended that they had ► Missing period.

Volume 4 - Part 2:

[33%] this school’s student council president!" ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [39%] “Can I help you, Chidori-kun?" Seeming ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [57%] “Sure." ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [57%] “Understood." ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [68%] “But what?" ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [71%] session. It’s free for up to eight people!" ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [72%] Kaname apologized. “I can’t today. “ ► A couple of issues: The dialogue's closing double quote is a starting one. Remove the extra space. [73%] “Boo. That stinks!" Shiroi did likewise. ► A couple of issues: The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. It should be Shiori. [74%] take care of. Sousuke?" Kaname called ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [75%] “Are we leaving now?" he asked. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [82%] “That building there," Sousuke told her. ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [85%] “It does." ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [88%] “Right." ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [89%] question for you. Do you know this man?" ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one. [96%] “What’s all this now?" came a voice from ► The dialogue's closing double quote is a normal one.

Volume 2 (Part One) - Part 4:

[73%] That’s it for today. I‘m beat. He sighed, ► It should be I’m (different ’ ).

@Kotenmaru That's exactly my point, because what he's saying currently is not ambiguous, and I think it's supposed to be. "it won't happen even if" means it won't happen, period, and the "even if" is just enumerating a specific way it won't work, not allowing for other ways that might.

Volume 3 - Part 12:

[45%] wouldn’t have said “one-shell” without knowing ► Nested double quotes. Use single quotes instead. [46%] but he wouldn’t have commited a necklace from ► It should be committed.

@AliceCheshire That's a good point. I toyed around with some alternative phrasings but I think I like the suggested wording the best, so I'll go with that.

Thanks for catching these, folks!

Volume 4 - Part 8:

[9%] so snippers weren’t a threat at the moment. ► It should be snipers.

Volume 2 - Part 11:

[27%] to incanting Midgard Serpent. Lastiara and ► It should be Midgard Blaze. [60%] The miasma just cause her to get poisoned ► It should be caused.

Vol. 3 Part 1

13%
She threw down the dice and rolled a six.
She threw down the die and rolled a six. (1 die)
She threw down the dice and rolled six. (2+ dice)

20%
I'd come to realize it half way through our match.
I'd come to realize it halfway through our match.

33%
After we'd both rolled the dice, (same dice rolled by each)
After we'd both rolled the die, (same die rolled by each)
After we'd each rolled our die, (different die rolled by each)
After we'd each rolled our dice, (different dice rolled by each)

she wielded this tried-and-test strategy
she wielded this tried-and-tested strategy

53%
It was too dark to see her face clearly, I could tell she was smiling.
It was too dark to see her face clearly, but I could tell she was smiling.
Although it was too dark to see her face clearly, I could tell she was smiling.

80%
"We have your ceremonial attire prepared ready for you,"
"We have your ceremonial attire prepared for you,"
"We have your ceremonial attire ready for you,"

Volume 15 - Part 2:

[73%] Creating projectiles, walls. footholds in high places, ► It should be a comma.

Volume 3 - Part 5:

[16%] relented to being accompanied by ten knights. ► Earlier in the same paragraph is says six knights. Around 53% it mentions again 5 + 5 knights though, so the right number should be ten. [39%] Nightvision: 2 ► Remove the bold format from the skill's level for consistency.

Volume 3 - Part 4:

[26%] She yanked out a silver ingot from her bag and ► It should be silvery like some paragraphs later since it's Vanadium rather than Silver? [84%] call them people—will be a bind. Because of this, ► It should be be in a bind.

Vol. 5 Part 11

10%
sent some Fish Bs down into the sea in case there was anything of note, but it had only found
sent some Fish Bs down into the sea in case there was anything of note, but they had only found
sent a Fish B down into the sea in case there was anything of note, but it had only found

50%
tried to stroke it, but it shook off her head by shaking its head
tried to stroke it, but it shook off her hand by shaking its head

Both At 40% on my device, change tripe to trip and dual to duel

Volume 1 Part 3:

and ithardly seemed the mannerism of a woman

and it hardly seemed the mannerism of a woman

Volume 13 - Part 2:

[67%] to bring you back to life so it’s okay to die!’” ► Add a comma to match the chapter's title? 🙄

Volume 5 - Part 8:

[43%] “Ah... I did set the Flower Garden up ► The dialogue's starting double quote alone is in italic format.

2.7

Getting confronted by my sister that directly blew all the theories and logic I had prepared

“so directly”
“That” isn't wrong, it just has a lot of meanings, and I had to read this several times before I guessed the one you intended.